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One
time, there was a little girl named Joanne, she is very beautiful, simple, and
cheerful. Joanne is an orphan; she only lives with her dad, who is only a
gardener in her friend house, Amy, who was blind. Even she lives without a mother,
she already lives happily with his dad.
One
day, she joined his dad to Amy house to go to work with him. When his father
was busy cut the bush, Joanne ask,
“Dad,
what do you want for your birthday gift?”
“I
won’t nothing” said him impatiently.
“May
I give you a ….. “
Haven’t
done with the words, her father cut her words,
“Can
you stop bothering me with your unimportant question?”
The
girl kept silent and gave a sorry look to his dad. Then, she went away from his
father and played with Amy. She told Amy that she is very sorry to her dad, and
she still think to gave her father a surprise for the birthday.
The
next morning she woke up earlier than usually, she hurriedly picked a box under
her bed, and put it on her daddy side. When
the dad woke up, he felt happy to see the box with Joanne name written on one
side of the box, but the happy smile disappeared as dad open the gift. There is
nothing inside the box.
Her
dad blood increase quickly, he felt so angry with her only child. He ran out of
his house and found his child try to cook for her. This thing didn’t make the
father feel better, actually it make him
got worse. The her Dad angry,
“WHAT
ARE YOU DOING WITH THAT STUFF?! YOU DON’T KNOW ANYTHING ‘BOUT COOKING!”
“But
Dad …. “
“AND
WHAT YOU DOING WITH THIS BOX, YOU WASTE THE PAPER, YOU WASTE MY MONEY TOO, DO
YOU KNOW HOW HARD TO WORK IS?!”
Joanne
starred at his dad face for a while, her face started to become pale, and tears
dropped from her face slowly, her father looked back and Joanne continued,
“Dad,
I have put something on it until it is overloaded, can you see?”
Her
dad takes a deep breath and says, “What do you put there? I see nothing”
Joanne
answers, “Dad, I filled it with my full-of-love kiss last night, I hope you
will feel better than before,”
she sobbed.
Her
dad eyes glazed, he realize that her little girl only wants to make him happy,
so, started from that time, they live happily. But not long after that moment,
an accident happened to Joanne, she was hit by a car.
When
Joanne struggles with her pain, faced her die, she said to her dad,
“Dad,
I have a wish that you must agreed and do”
With
tears fell from his eyes he reply, “A-a-a-and what is it?”
“I
want you to give my eyes to Amy, she needs it more than I am”
Her
dad nod, and continued to cry loudly, as Joanne blew away her last breath.
ame : Written by: Elisabeth Lalita and Maulana Resha Vivadi
Level : ET – 11/ Term 4/ 2012
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sad story, but i think this is called true love
ReplyDeletevery dramatic story, the story can make the reader cry. joanne is a good girl. she tried to be happy him on her father birthday. before she died she told her father to give her eyes to amy. joanne sacrifice deserve our example so that we can share with each other.
ReplyDeleteby : sukma wismawan a EL-4
Very sad story. Joanne's father doesn't realize that his daughter really love him very much. But when he already know that his daughter really love him, not longer joanne is passed away. He should not be angry when Joanne wanted to give him a gift. Because she just want to make him happy. He should proud that he has a wonderful daughter who want to help and share to each other.
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